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Thirs page even if I still have to finish the n. 1 o.o
well XD it's difficult to draw a kiss scene >3<
I hope I did well anyway..
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~KomoniraTE Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
whoops XD
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~EmoJulek18 Nov 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice. xD
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I loved that ending! Dero, it is kidding with Devit!

Now I wondered what the kisses and Jasdero Devit would. Just not so
wet right? XD

Congratulations! I saved on my computer your doujinshi.


Sorry my English. My English classes did not prepare me for this.

BEST INCEST X is JASDERO DEVITO! :giggle:
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~Sorgiva Feb 6, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
aw thank you <3
I don't like how I drew some panels on this doujinshi ._.
so I'm workin on a longer one :) still on jas x devi, cause yeah, they are the best!!
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And the first question coming to my mind is... where is the first page? :<
But, having the first page or not, its such a cute mini-doujin <3 Kissing scene went pretty good. I always have a hard time when I'm drawing one *sighs*
Final panel owns all comics, Jasdero completely ruined the romantic vibes! xD
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~Sorgiva Dec 21, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol that's right, I uploaded it on the portfolio but not on the deviant haha xD
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:iconaldri-mer:
Ooh, I like the 'Sadism' thing, it's really very well drawn, sadly I don't understand a single word... and it seem unfinished :c
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~Sorgiva Dec 21, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh I found the translation <3

page 1)

a wound.
salt in the wound.
blood flowing from the wound.
screams of pain.
other salt as medicine.


page 2)
sadism's always been a dominant trait in their personality
since childhood their favorite pastime was to hunt and kill every kind of livin being.
[from butterflies] infilzate con degli spilli
[to lizards] tear the legs was so damn funny!

page 3)
bloods'smell...was so good!!
they were always held firmly by the hands,
the idea of interrupting the contact was not liked at all.
the fact that they were separated, for them, was wrong.

page 4)
-Do you ever feel like you're split in half? -
They could not remember who the two had spoken those words ... and yet remained firmly rooted in the mind ... they were not two people, they were one. On one side they found something enchanting ... the other began to grow within them a strong sense of anxiety that never informs the other. A distress after sudden crying flowed into a single statement: "we are incomplete"

page 5)
mmmmh... first he must be tall!
right!
can u imagine him tall?
of course!
yes, jasdevi will be tall..and then umh..
and then he will be blonde!
no, jasdevi must be dark!
and why?
because the older twin it's me, and I'm dark-head so jasdevi must be too!
but that's not fair...I think of him as blonde!
then he will be 2 colours! dark, with some locks blonde. what do u think?
yes! this way is so much better!

page 6)
the fellow was a really strange guy!

page 7)
somewhere, hidden by people'sight...
hey what's with that face?
it's big brother's due to make the little be happy, didn't you know?
so you must smile when he'll come, you don't want him to cry, do you?
...even if...
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:iconaldri-mer:
Thanks so much :iconhyperplz:

Ok, now I'm sure I like it. <3 It's good that we don't know too much about the twons from the manga, it gives a lot of questions and lot of space for imagination to find multiple answers for them. Like how you shown them being sadistic even in early childhood - such a refreshing change after so many fanfics showing them like bullied kids - and love the way how they found out Jasdevi. It's even pretty possible it really happened like that, because even in the manga, becoming Jasdevi they said it's a body they imagined, not the body they truly are - as many speculations about them seems to assume.

Well well, wonder whose feet it is on the last panel >B How long this doujin is going to be?
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~Sorgiva Dec 22, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you <3
I'm one of the few people that believe jasdero and devit are twins and not 1 single person.
I really believe that's how jasdevi was born. I mean it's like when you are a child and talk with your friends about your "perfect husband". You put XX's eyes, XX's lips etc.
I think that's just the same with them :)

well I can tell you the feet are from a blonde woman Devit caught for Jasdero as a present *the hair is xD* and then Jasdero goes all jealous screaming something like "why is it a woman?! it's only me and you right?!" and Devit kisse him and goes like "just you and me for ever!"

Xd oh well, that was the plot anyway
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